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如何解决雅思写作文字数不足的问题

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  很多同学一度误以为作文字数不够是不会扣分的,但事实上是会扣分的,而且许多同学经常会觉得作文字数凑不满,那么怎么来解决这个问题呢?如果我们阅读一篇学术文章,不难发现其实里面会有很多的无意义词,什么是无意义词呢?其实就是那些连接词和议论文经常套用的小短语,它们不会影响整篇文章的总体意思,却可以提高文章的连贯性,而通过这个方法,字数不够的问题也迎刃而解了。下面是小编为您收集整理的如何解决雅思写作文字数不足的问题,供大家参考!

  如何解决雅思写作文字数不足的问题

  以下是雅思写作必备的连词汇总。用下划线highlight的词是适合那些总感觉雅思作文写不长、写不满250字、需要灌水的同学。

  · To signal sequence or addition

  Accordingly, actually, additionally, afterwards, again, also, and, another, as was previously stated, as well as, at the same time, besides this, consistent with this, correspondingly, equally important, finally, further, furthermore, in addition, in a like manner, in the first place, in the same way, including, initially, last, likewise, more importantly, moreover, next, originally, overall, primarily, similarly, to begin with, too, what is more.

  · To signal time

  After, afterward, as long as, at first, at last, at length, at the same time, before, concurrently, currently, during, finally, following, immediately, in the future, in the meantime, last but not least, later, meanwhile, next, once, presently, rarely, simultaneously, sometimes, subsequently, then, this time, until, until then, whenever, while.

  · To show results

  Accordingly, as a result, consequently, for this reason, hence, in other words, in that case, it follows that, it is evident that, otherwise, owing to, resulting from this, so it can be seen that, that being the case, therefore this implies, this suggests that, thus, under these circumstances.

  · To introduce evidence/support/reasons

  Contradictory to this, contrarily, in support of this, it follows, this is clear because, the evidence for···is, the reasons for···are, this is supported by, to affirm this, to attest to this, to corroborate, to explain, to further confirm, to further verify, to list, to substantiate this, in substantiation.

  · To signal repetition, summary, or conclusion

  Accordingly, all in all, all together, as a final point, as a result, as I have noted, as indicated earlier, as mentioned, as previously stated, as we have seen, briefly, by and large, consequently, finally, given these facts, hence, in brief, in conclusion, in other words, in short, in summary, to sum up, in summation, on the whole, overall, since, so, summing up, then, therefore, thus, thus we can see that, to conclude, to recapitulate, to repeat, to review.

  · To introduce causes or effects

  Accordingly, as a result, because, consequently, due to, for as much as, for that reason, hence, in as much as, in that, in view of, on account of, owing, since, then, therefore, thus, to narrow the focus, after all, from this perspective, from this point of view, given this context, in fact, in order to, in other words, in particular, in this case, in this context, indeed, particularly, put another way, specifically, that is, this is particularly true when, under certain, circumstances, up to a point, with this in mind.

  · To contrast

  After all, although, alternately, and yet, at the same time, be that as it may, contrastingly, conversely, despite, dissimilarly, even though, for all that, however, in contrast, in contrast to this, in opposition to this, in reality, in spite of this, inconsistent with this is that, instead, meanwhile, nevertheless, nonetheless, notwithstanding, on the contrary, on the one hand, on the other hand, otherwise, paradoxically, rather than, regardless of, still, though, whereas, when in fact, yet.

  · To compare

  Also, analogous to, another similar issue is, at the same time, by the same token, equally, in comparison, in like manner, in similar fashion, in the same way, likewise, similarly.

  · To clarify

  In other words, that is, that is to say, this means that, to clarify, to elaborate, to explain, to paraphrase, to put it another way.

  · To show purpose

  In order to, in the hope that, for the purpose, with this end, to the end that, with this objective

  · To dismiss

  All the same, at any rate, either way, in any event, in either case, whatever happens.

  · To signal concession

  Admittedly, albeit, although it is true that certainly, even so, granted, it may appear that, knowing this, naturally, of course, this is only the case when, while this is true, while it may seem that.

  · To signify a condition

  Granting that, in the event of, on the condition that, providing that, so long as

  · To prove examples

  As an illustration, by way of example, for example, for instance, in particular, in support of this, notably, to demonstrate, to elaborate, to exemplify, to highlight, to illustrate, specifically, that is.

  · To reference

  Concerning this, considering this, with respect to, with regards to

  · To emphasize

  Above all, as a matter of fact, certainly, chiefly, especially, importantly, in any case, in particular, indeed, it must be emphasized, that, mainly, mostly, notably, obviously, of course, particularly, primarily, specifically, truly, undoubtedly.

  当然这里还要提醒考生们需要注意的是,必须理解这些词的用法而不能机械的带入到句子中,否则反而会显得非常突兀,影响全文整体的感觉。希望同学们在练习写作的过程中,尝试着使用这些词,会感觉受益匪浅。

  雅思写作想得高分需避免的句式

  关于雅思写作需要避免的一些句式,这些句式在写作中应用会有各种各样的问题,下面大家要求来看看详细内容吧。

  1. a lot of/lots of

  这对词组一般不要出现在academic essay中,考官已经看烦了.可以用A considerable number of代替

  2. Everything has two sides/every coin has tow sides

  说了跟没说一样,明显的事实,以后也不要用了

  3. Recently

  这个词不好.按照他们的说法就是too imprecise,没有一个具体的时间.可以用 In the last 5 years…/since….代替

  4. There is survey……

  老师是这么说的:has there been?/only say this if you actually know of one 也就是说考官知道这些都是你编的,最好不要用了

  5. And, because, but

  这三个词我们还是经常会用到.其实最好用in addition, therefore, however等代替

  6. 不能用vivid 来形容world vivid可以用来说memories或者是dream之类的

  7. No one can deny that…/Undoubtedly

  这2个词组太绝对了,用来开头并不合适. 其实每个人都能持与你意见相反的态度

  8. in a word

  很多人会用它来做conclusion. 鬼佬的意见是:如果你准备用这个词组来引出你的观点,那你最好用一个词来概括,谁让你是这么写的呢

  9. Meanwhile don’t use in general academic writing or for task 2—but it is ok for describing a process in task 1.

  10. Nowadays

  理由和3差不多, 这个词用在文章里显得太普通了, 老师的原话是it does not mean very much

  11. It is a well known fact… 最好不要用, 有的考官会扣分

  12. advantages and disadvantages 换成merits and drawback 和pros and cons

  13. In my opinion, I dis/agree with this

  这是多余的表达. When stating your opinion you follow with a fact 相信大家都能看懂,就不翻译了

  14. IELTS文章中千万不能用缩写. 例如I’m 在考场上别犯懒,平时最好也别写缩写,多多注意,养成习惯

  15. very不能用来形容delicious, lovely, fantastic, wonderful, amazing, gorgeous and huge.

  16. human being MS这个词指的是动物+植物, 以后可以用man kind代替

  阅读理解里做题,做到只要出现极端词汇的题,99%都是错的——相信无论是应试还是别个老师一定说过这句话。

  如果这条成立,为什么在自己的作文里还会出现什么

  as we all know?

  it can not be denied?

  除非你真的列举一些不可推翻的事实,比如:中国是世界上人口最多的国家——可是太过事实的事实,往往对你的作文毫无用处,就比如:every coin has two sides.都是写可写可不写的废话。

  以上就是关于雅思写作高分需要避免的句式的详细内容,非常实用,解析也简单明了。这些句式在中国考生的文章中出现的次数很多大家在备考自己的雅思写作考试的时候,尽量避免这些句式的内容,寻找更加贴合文章中心的具体句式会更加有效率。

  A poor child may believe that one can get along, if not as easily, without wealth. A wealthy child may be well trained by a parent steeped in the knowledge of money management; the key to developing this skill is education.

  点评:最后一段有点像是提出解决这个问题的办法,即 education. 它没有像传统的结尾段那样简单的重申自己的观点。

  总结之总结:

  全文的观点有待揣摩,作者很明显是不赞成题目的说法,即 Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. 但是作者自己是更偏向穷人家的孩子呢,还是富人家的孩子呢?!根据文章来看,作者是中立,他所看重的是他们所接受的教育。In other words,整篇文章又是一次中立的写法。在雅思考试中,这种写法经常使用,还是非常实用的,大家可以学习一下。此外,文章中有很多好词好句,特别是长句,值得模仿一下,此篇9分雅思作文。

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