如何写出英语高分作文

　　英语作文是一项综合能力的考试，主要是考学生对词汇、语法和句子结构以及连句成文的掌握程度。笔者认为，要想让学生在规定的30分钟内写出一篇较好的作文，教师应该在平时的课堂教学中认真指导学生注重审题、切题、连贯通顺、语法正确、语言规范这五个环节。本文旨在谈谈在写出英语高分作文这个方面的具体作法。

　　如何写出英语高分作文

　　一、写作诀窍

　　总体把握，要点齐全;人称时态，逻辑清楚;

　　关键词汇，动词第一;组词成句，结构完整;

　　组句成文，连词增色;此路不通，绕道迂回;

　　字迹工整，留好印象;从句适量，高分有望。

　　二、写作步骤

　　1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。

　　2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。

　　3.写完要点，但不随意发挥。

　　4.先草稿，后抄写。

　　三、习作点评

　　[2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组] (14分)

　　Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. tell the magazine readers.

　　﹒what exactly your hobby is;

　　﹒when and how you became interested in this hobby;

　　﹒why you enjoy your hobby;

　　﹒about your hopes and plans for the future.

　　写作要求：

　　1. 根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。

　　2. 条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。

　　3. 词数60-80。

　　[学生习作a]

　　My hobby is read books. when i was seven years old .

　　I became interested in reading books. I like needing books

　　Because there are a lot of useful things in books. I can learn

　　a lot of knowledge from books. Books also can teach me

　　how to be a good person . Books even can solve many

　　problems for me . I will read more good books to improve

　　myself.

　　①改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。

　　②also的位置应放在can之后。

　　[点评]：档次9-11分。

　　①要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。

　　②句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在回答上述① ② ③问题。

　　③有少量错误。

　　[学生习作b]

　　My hobby is reading .reading books is very enjoyable .

　　When I was young, my mother used to tell me a story before

　　I went to bed every night .the stories were so interesting

　　that I always felt they weren't enough . So I began to read

　　books by myself .little by little I became interested in

　　reading . I can learn much knowledge and many interesting

　　things all over the world .when I read books , I can enjoy the

　　beautiful sentences . At the same time I can improve my

　　writing . I want to be a writer in the future, so I must study

　　hard and read more books so that my dream can come true .